If you're going to narrate an audiobook, quit smoking.
I just finished listening to Maximum Damage by Jack Mars, and I have…mixed feelings.
The premise was excellent. Grant Valor and four others find themselves in the maximum amount of trouble possible with their respective governments. These are not rule-followers. They’re the kind of people who get results…even if those results occasionally make their superiors nervous.
Enter Commander Kent, who forms Sentinel, a covert team designed to stop trouble before it starts. They operate outside traditional government restraints, outside normal chains of command, and definitely outside the comfort zone. I was in. It’s a solid setup for a fast-paced thriller. A group of highly skilled operatives, working off the grid, tackling global threats before they explode? Yes, please.
The story itself was good. I think. And that’s where things get tricky. Because the narrator kept pulling me out of the story.
You know how sometimes a narrator enhances a book so much that you forget you’re even listening? This was…not that. Definitely Not That.
The voice sounded like a four-pack-a-day smoker, and there was something just…off…about the cadence. Pauses where there shouldn’t be pauses. Sentences that sounded like they were restarted mid-thought. Occasionally, it even felt like parts of lines were skipped or repeated. Instead of getting lost in the action, I kept getting pulled back to the actual narration. And that’s frustrating, because the story deserved better.
I really think the right narrator could have added so much more tension, urgency, personality. Instead, the narration made it harder to fully connect with the story. That said, I’m not giving up on the series. The premise is strong enough, and the characters interesting enough, that I’d like to give the author another chance. This time, though, I think I’ll grab a hard copy of the next book. Because this feels like one where reading it myself might make all the difference. After all, it’s not the author’s fault the narration left a lot to be desired.
And sometimes, the right voice changes everything.



















