A killer who's a few lug nuts short of a full set, a detective worth rooting for, and enough suspense to make bedtime completely negotiable.
I've dealt with pushy car salesmen before, but after reading Final Price by J. Gregory Smith, I may never negotiate the price of a vehicle again. Apparently, asking for a better deal can be hazardous to your health.
Shamus Ryan sells new cars for a living, and he's had just about enough of customers who waste his time, haggle over every penny, and expect him to practically give away the merchandise. Most salesmen might complain to their coworkers or go home and have a stiff drink. Shamus, however, is a few lug nuts short of a full set. He decides the appropriate response is murder.
And just like that, a serial killer is born.
The story alternates between Shamus, who has some rather creative ways of justifying his murderous activities, and investigator Paul Chang, who's trying to figure out how a series of seemingly unrelated murders fits together. We know who the killer is from the beginning, but that doesn't diminish the suspense one bit. If anything, it makes things worse. I knew what Shamus was doing, I knew someone else was going to die, and I desperately wanted to reach into the book and drag Paul toward the answers. Unfortunately, he couldn't hear me yelling at him.
Paul was a wonderful character. He's transferred to Delaware after a case went sideways in New York, his marriage has fallen apart, and he's haunted by his past. To make matters worse, his new workplace is populated by bigots, including a boss who seems more interested in displaying his department's diversity than respecting Paul's abilities. When Paul's former partner Nelson joins the investigation, he encounters homophobia as well.
But Paul rises above it. He remains professional, thoughtful, and determined to do his job. His combination of Eastern and Western investigative techniques, including feng shui and an inner focus he calls the Dragon, makes him particularly interesting. His boss even bolts his desk to the floor to prevent him from rearranging his workspace. Apparently, achieving inner harmony is against department policy.
The investigation unfolds naturally, with Paul and Nelson methodically following the evidence and trying to discover what connects the victims. Shamus's unusual use of food in his murders adds another wonderfully disturbing element. I won't elaborate, but let's just say Smith has managed to make both car shopping and certain dining experiences considerably less appealing.
The atmosphere is relentlessly tense. There aren't necessarily shocking twists around every corner, but there doesn't need to be. The suspense comes from knowing the danger is there and wondering whether Paul can connect the dots before another person dies. I kept telling myself I'd stop after one more chapter. Smith apparently considered that a personal challenge.
The ending was believable, satisfying, and exactly what the story deserved. No ridiculous coincidences, no eye-rolling investigative shortcuts, and no unnecessary bedroom gymnastics. Just excellent storytelling from beginning to end.
Five enthusiastic stars. Smith gave me a fascinating killer, a protagonist I genuinely cared about, an intelligent investigation, and a serious case of sleep deprivation. I loved every minute of it.
And if I ever buy another new car, I think I'll just pay sticker price. Better safe than sorry.



















