Great thriller. The narration owes me an apology.
I just finished listening to Dead Inside by Kate Bold, and I have… feelings. Let’s start with the story itself.
The killer freezes women in blocks of ice and puts them on display at winter festivals. That is next-level unhinged. It’s the kind of premise that makes you stop and think, Who comes up with this stuff? And then immediately keep listening because you need to know what happens next.
FBI Agent Kelsey Hawk is intense, driven, and occasionally impulsive, which is exactly why her partnership with Deputy Sheriff John Gallant works so well. He’s steady where she’s sharp, calm where she pushes. I genuinely enjoyed their dynamic. He was such a strong supporting character without feeling overshadowed.
If I had read this in hard copy, I would have easily given the story five stars. The pacing was solid. The concept was bold (no pun intended). The killer was truly unsettling. This is my kind of crime thriller...high stakes, twisted, and just a little bit outrageous.
Now. We need to talk about the audiobook narration.
Mispronunciations of common words, like hoped ("ho'-ped"). Flat delivery. Almost no inflection. And, most distracting of all, the AI voice would sometimes go up for male characters and down for female characters. Backwards. Repeatedly. It completely pulled me out of the tension. And in a thriller, tension is everything.
The narration didn’t just fail to elevate the story, it actively worked against it. I would rate the story a five. The narration, on the other hand, was a negative five. It genuinely took away from what was otherwise a gripping read.
If you’re interested in this one, I strongly recommend reading it rather than listening. The story deserves better than the performance it got.























